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Jenn's avatar

Wonderful twist to this short story!

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Alexander Semenyuk's avatar

Glad you liked!

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AKcidentalwriter's avatar

well done. I enjoyed

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Alexander Semenyuk's avatar

Having some fun! Thank you

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Macy Lu's avatar

This was a really creative reimagination of the creation story. Great job!

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Alexander Semenyuk's avatar

Having some fun with it!

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Spiritual Entertainer's avatar

I've always been fascinated by the person of Jesus, The saints, the sages, prophets and the like. I always wondered what drove this people to say outrageous things that others couldn't feel or grasp. I mean Jesus said he was the son of God, saints claimed to see God, others claimed God called them to do this or that and all this things made me even more curious as to what exactly they had see that made them say things that an ordinary person would consider insane. I continued my searching journey through reading different religious texts and listening to commentaries from gurus on Christianity, Islam, Hinduism, Buddhism, Zen, Taoism, ancient Greek and Egyptian knowledge of Hermes the Great, Judaism and the scientific notions. As I continued to gain their insight a certain kind of energy was starting to grow inside me, during my most relaxed states I could feel an energy grow within me and right on top of my head like an energy that's not part of me. During this moments the sense of My self got lost and there was no more me, and I felt like I'm part of everything and everything is part of me, there was total harmony, the boundaries of my sensation expanded beyond my body and everything felt like me. There's no thought the mind is calm and empty, there's peace and bliss, there is no fear of death and I could feel my own eternity. I wish every human being gets to have this experience even if it's just once in their lifetime, I feel it's the only thing that should matter to everyone because one gets to be fully alive and live better without any anxieties, compulsive thinking, always running around in such of the golden goodie when we all have it right here and now.

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Alexander Semenyuk's avatar

Do you often have powerful meditation experiences?

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Spiritual Entertainer's avatar

Yes, I often retreat from the noisy world to just meditate and forget myself.

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Tree Langdon's avatar

Very creative. Ive always wondered if we're from the stars

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Alexander Semenyuk's avatar

fun little story!

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