Alison! I read the whole story out loud to my husband! We're almost in a small rural town where my mama lives and it was perfect! So spot on descriptive!!! Another incredible piece of fiction that has me seeing it so vividly in cinema form! Love the title and the characters. You are so very talented 🙌🏻✨🦋
Alison, that was fantastic. One of the best pieces of yours that I've read so far. Descriptive and enthralling. You nailed diners too. At some point when you were young you almost had to have worked part time at one or frequented one. I'm a fan of diners, even if the soup isn't homemade. - Jim
Really enjoyed it. When I first started reading the piece I was scanning the words. After a few lines I went back and read and savored each line as it was written. I slowed down and let the story unfold in my mind. I wish I could write like this but like my drawings, no one but my mother enjoys a poorly drawn stick man.
Alison! I read the whole story out loud to my husband! We're almost in a small rural town where my mama lives and it was perfect! So spot on descriptive!!! Another incredible piece of fiction that has me seeing it so vividly in cinema form! Love the title and the characters. You are so very talented 🙌🏻✨🦋
Thank you Deborah! This means so much to me! 💕
You are an exceptional writer :) ox
Alison, that was fantastic. One of the best pieces of yours that I've read so far. Descriptive and enthralling. You nailed diners too. At some point when you were young you almost had to have worked part time at one or frequented one. I'm a fan of diners, even if the soup isn't homemade. - Jim
Really enjoyed it. When I first started reading the piece I was scanning the words. After a few lines I went back and read and savored each line as it was written. I slowed down and let the story unfold in my mind. I wish I could write like this but like my drawings, no one but my mother enjoys a poorly drawn stick man.
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