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Deborah T. Hewitt's avatar

Whoa. This is so good Alison! You are such a fantastic writer! I can only hope to be half as good someday. What a story! Once again, I could see it all. Can't wait for more. Thank you. Hope you're having a wonderful break. oxox

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Alison, what a great job creating the atmosphere, town and characters. I was watching it on a screen in real time, not reading it. Really enjoyed this story. Super good. - Jim

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S.M. Osborne's avatar

Awesome opening salvo! I can't wait to read more, and it's also a big inspiration for someone who'd like to eventually write a serial story on Substack as well.

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AKcidentalwriter's avatar

I enjoyed the story! Definitely want to know how it ends. You have a book here! Congrats

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Caroline's avatar

I actually didn’t read the preamble, and thought this was a “teaser” for a book. I read the story, then went back to the top to find out how to order the book, and was disappointed to find there wasn’t one. I hope there will be more!

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Claire L Guichard's avatar

I really like it, as a spiritual person myself, ticks the boxes... I wanted to keep reading 📚

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Paul Leone's avatar

This is off to a great start. The end of the first chapter really hooks you!

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Great start!!! Can't wait to read more!

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Alison Bull's avatar

Thank you so much! I’m finishing up my current serial and Clamtown is next!

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Charlotte Pendragon's avatar

I couldn’t put this down @Alison Bull! Riveting story, and written sooooo well! I’m so fortunate to have found you here on Substack! Thank you! ✨💖🤗

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Merissa Nicole's avatar

Ooh, loved the ending! Great job!

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