POEM/HAIKU PROMPT #4
Ok, here's my haiku for this challenge.
When life is too much
Instead of pushing harder
Close your eyes and rest
Another great one
Lovely reminder ❤️
Flowers dreaming spring
Dancing blossoms overhead
Kissing sun shining
Very pretty imagery!
Thank you, I like pretty things, flowers and sunshine in the spring.
🌸🌞🌼🐝🌺🌷
One child has green, the other has hazel. Neither carry my dark brown, the color I inherited from my grandmother.
They adorn wisps of my DNA,
Through wavy hair or dimpled smiles.
I am reminded though that through their eyes, the color of a summer river, that their vision is their own.
I cherish and fear, in equal measure, letting go.
Wonderful personal reflection put into poetry!
Thank you! High praise coming from you!!😊💕
That's so sweet, I love it.
Thank you so much!💕
Thank you!!🥰
Dark blue, curious,
Just like mine in this small face,
With his dad’s lashes.
Wonderful imagery and feeling
A blank canvas sits before me
I sit in uncertainty
Then I paint
Nice!
I love the quiet, then the movement.
Thank you. I was literally doing that. Day one of mandala painting is now complete.
An eye for an eye
is seldom a solution.
Trust the universe.
Awesome!
Ay - I see you - aye
Eying me through a needle
You'll poke your eye out
Very interesting!
Blue, brown, green and grey
Pathway to the inner soul
Fall madly deeply.
Pretty poetry
Fading winter sun,
the closing eyes of the Earth;
yet still there is light.
Really pretty
Your poem is beautiful! There are so many beautiful ones here.
Through eyes like windows
Screens stare deeply into souls
Glazed stare is returned
Thanks for the prompt!
Very nice and thank you!
Ah, love this, especially the last line
Thank you for the kind words!!!
Lamp of the body
Shines good or bad, dark or light
What does your eye see?
Deep!
Haven't written a haiku in ages. thanks for the interesting challenge!
Listen for her voice:
She calls with eyes so knowing
And glides on water.
Pretty!
Head with cold rolled eyes
she shakes daily from nonsense
of this upside world
Powerful and real imagery
This is awesome!
🤍
I find comfort in:
Stars that shine in the night sky
Eyes like paradise
Beautiful!
her third eye opens
and all the mens' guts spill out
so Shiva lays down
And she rests
My eyes delightedly see only what they want,
everything else walks beside me
waiting to be observed
Great!
Ok, here's my haiku for this challenge.
When life is too much
Instead of pushing harder
Close your eyes and rest
Another great one
Lovely reminder ❤️
Flowers dreaming spring
Dancing blossoms overhead
Kissing sun shining
Very pretty imagery!
Thank you, I like pretty things, flowers and sunshine in the spring.
🌸🌞🌼🐝🌺🌷
One child has green, the other has hazel. Neither carry my dark brown, the color I inherited from my grandmother.
They adorn wisps of my DNA,
Through wavy hair or dimpled smiles.
I am reminded though that through their eyes, the color of a summer river, that their vision is their own.
I cherish and fear, in equal measure, letting go.
Wonderful personal reflection put into poetry!
Thank you! High praise coming from you!!😊💕
That's so sweet, I love it.
Thank you so much!💕
Thank you!!🥰
Dark blue, curious,
Just like mine in this small face,
With his dad’s lashes.
Wonderful imagery and feeling
A blank canvas sits before me
I sit in uncertainty
Then I paint
Nice!
I love the quiet, then the movement.
Thank you. I was literally doing that. Day one of mandala painting is now complete.
An eye for an eye
is seldom a solution.
Trust the universe.
Awesome!
Ay - I see you - aye
Eying me through a needle
You'll poke your eye out
Very interesting!
Blue, brown, green and grey
Pathway to the inner soul
Fall madly deeply.
Pretty poetry
Fading winter sun,
the closing eyes of the Earth;
yet still there is light.
Really pretty
Your poem is beautiful! There are so many beautiful ones here.
Through eyes like windows
Screens stare deeply into souls
Glazed stare is returned
Thanks for the prompt!
Very nice and thank you!
Ah, love this, especially the last line
Thank you for the kind words!!!
Lamp of the body
Shines good or bad, dark or light
What does your eye see?
Deep!
Haven't written a haiku in ages. thanks for the interesting challenge!
Listen for her voice:
She calls with eyes so knowing
And glides on water.
Pretty!
Head with cold rolled eyes
she shakes daily from nonsense
of this upside world
Powerful and real imagery
This is awesome!
🤍
I find comfort in:
Stars that shine in the night sky
Eyes like paradise
Beautiful!
her third eye opens
and all the mens' guts spill out
so Shiva lays down
And she rests
My eyes delightedly see only what they want,
everything else walks beside me
waiting to be observed
Great!