Mist
A Poem
My mirror is misty I can’t see clearly My vision is blurry I can’t see clearly I spray I wipe I squint I try To assess things fairly I break I shatter The illusions One by one Finally The mist is clearing
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The progression from blurry confusion to breaking illusions one by one realy captures that moment of clarity. The repetition of 'I can't see clearly' amplifies the frustration before the breakthrough. Love how concise this is while still hitting that emotional arc of self-realizaton.
Beautiful.